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Someone had a fun night.

I half-jokingly thought of "censoring" the middle panel, and the TWC incentive is a couple of silly attempts at that.
Posted by eishiya on March 21st, 2018, 10:58 am. Reply


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What were you drinking, bro? :D
Posted by Hokova on March 21st, 2018, 2:51 pm. Reply

@Hokova: At least he's not hungover :D?
Posted by eishiya on March 21st, 2018, 6:46 pm. Reply

The censoring would make it more focused on that specific part... lol.

But back to story.
It's never a good sign to wake up naked in an unfamiliar place.
Posted by JoKeR on March 21st, 2018, 2:56 pm. Reply

@JoKeR: That's why I only did it as a joke xP
Posted by eishiya on March 21st, 2018, 6:32 pm. Reply

Oh Roy, I can see your ...dandelion. XD

I dunno if he's working undercover as a skow or the werewolf thing is true after all. Or he got popular at the station after Blair left and now the lads invite him to thee end of shift boozing in a pub.
Posted by Oly-RRR on March 21st, 2018, 2:57 pm. Reply

@Oly-RRR: I was going to have a short bit in chapter 5 where Roy got invited out for a drink (but refused) and decided not to do it without even considering the effect it would've had on this scene. I'm glad I didn't, oops 8D
Posted by eishiya on March 21st, 2018, 6:37 pm. Reply

This is such a strong open to a chapter. Very nice.
Posted by kayotics on March 21st, 2018, 5:25 pm. Reply

@kayotics: Some cliches are cliches because they work 8]
Posted by eishiya on March 21st, 2018, 6:22 pm. Reply

If you were going to censor it, I would have suggested a piece of fabric from the line dramatically swooshing by, but it works just fine as it is.

And on the next page, Blair is going to enter the scene and go "I took care of your inner thigh area while you were passed out ;)", mirroring the start of chapter 4 :')
Posted by Glueckskeks on March 21st, 2018, 7:45 pm. Reply

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